Merric grumbled to himself. He was a powerful mage, wielder of the Excalibur tome. Why he had to listen to some random summoner from another world, he didn’t know. And why he had to battle people summoned from yet other worlds for a war in a completely different one, he really didn’t know.
His stomach growled, and he grimaced, hoping no one else had noticed the embarrassing noise. The food in this new world wasn’t agreeing with him, either. His guts protested again, an ominous grumbling vibrating in his intestines, and he coughed to hide the sound.
Behind him, a woman in heavy pink armor wiped sweat from her eyes. ̶
I may love scat, but I’m getting really sick of reading shitty fetish writing. I’m not a great writer myself, but I try to make things interesting, and I figured I could share some of the writing tips I’ve come across with others to see if it helps anyone.
Formatting
First off, when writing dialogue, remember that a new speaker means a new paragraph. If you don’t make a new paragraph when a speaker changes, often you can’t even tell who’s speaking. Use tab to indent.
Second, space out the paragraphs. Reading text onscreen is already headache inducing, and when all I see is a wall of text, I’m not
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Weight Gain
Stuffing
Muscles
Hypnosis
Goo
Water
Wet and Messy
Farting
Digestion
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